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Name: Talem Consta Gender: Male Race: Sabyr Rider Home: He has none since he is a nomad. Relatives: None Appearance: Talem is the kind of guy that people are scared about. He hates socializing. He he tall, and of strong, and large build. He strong! His brown hair and blue eyes are classical. His Sabyr is Massive and Brown. He is large and swift. His green eyes are amazing. Background: He has had a rough life. He loves to fight and can't be stopped. He doesn't know his parents, or family. He is only left with this void of his life. His darkness seems only to hurt him. He doesn't try to be nasty, just that it seems like he always. He lives alone and only trusts his Sabyr. Other: None Reason for travelling to the Ruins of Time: He wants to find out why he lives, and who he belongs to. He also wants to klll Amett. Reasons known to him.
You should tell what side your character is on. Either For or Against Amett the demon.
Partner: Tela, Talem's Sabyr.
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Joined: Sept 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 1,930 Location: Where do you think I am? Karma: 6 |  | Re: Talem: Sabyr Rider « Reply #1 on Apr 28, 2009, 6:49pm » | |
I can't find the list but I think that Sabyr Riders are a restricted race...?
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Joined: Nov 2008 Gender: Male  Posts: 431 Location: My little world. ;-) Karma: 11 |  | Re: Talem: Sabyr Rider « Reply #2 on Apr 28, 2009, 6:51pm » | |
Oh? I didnt see them on it? :/
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Joined: Nov 2008 Gender: Male  Posts: 431 Location: My little world. ;-) Karma: 11 |  | Re: Talem: Sabyr Rider « Reply #3 on Apr 28, 2009, 6:52pm » | |
Dragon: Need at least 6 recruits or more... Shapeshifter: Need at least 5 recruits or more... Zayrena: Need at least 5 recruits or more... Elemental: Need at least 6 recruits or more...
Here they are.
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Joined: Sept 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 1,930 Location: Where do you think I am? Karma: 6 |  | Re: Talem: Sabyr Rider « Reply #4 on Apr 28, 2009, 6:55pm » | |
ah okay then I guess they're not restricted xD nevermind then. I don't know the village name but I assume he's a nomad anyway since he lives alone and it wouldn't make sense to put the village as his home if he does. Clean up the use of the word "large" (you used it a LOT, try some synonyms or just take out a few) and then I'll accept it ^^
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Joined: Sept 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 1,930 Location: Where do you think I am? Karma: 6 |  | Re: Talem: Sabyr Rider « Reply #5 on Apr 28, 2009, 7:09pm » | |
Okay it's good now. ^^
You look down and by your feet you find a piece of soft leather worked into a bag. Inside the draw-string pouch are the following items:
- Sparks scroll - 600 gems (added to your total already) - Graphite stub/notebook - wooden shield - short sword
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Joined: Jul 2008 Gender: Male  Posts: 916 Location: Somewhere Karma: 11 |  | Re: Talem: Sabyr Rider « Reply #6 on Apr 28, 2009, 7:24pm » | |
Sounds like a combination of Larc and Nox to me, not that I have a problem with him.
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Joined: Nov 2008 Gender: Male  Posts: 431 Location: My little world. ;-) Karma: 11 |  | Re: Talem: Sabyr Rider « Reply #7 on Apr 28, 2009, 7:26pm » | |
What? Talem is harsh. Not friendly. I didn't go off Nox. That would be copying...
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Joined: Jul 2008 Gender: Male  Posts: 916 Location: Somewhere Karma: 11 |  | Re: Talem: Sabyr Rider « Reply #8 on Apr 28, 2009, 7:31pm » | |
Nox is far from friendly. I know you didn't copy but I see similarities., that's all.
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Joined: Nov 2008 Gender: Male  Posts: 431 Location: My little world. ;-) Karma: 11 |  | Re: Talem: Sabyr Rider « Reply #9 on Apr 28, 2009, 7:34pm » | |
Oh...alright. I didnt mean to do that. :/
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Joined: Jul 2008 Gender: Male  Posts: 916 Location: Somewhere Karma: 11 |  | Re: Talem: Sabyr Rider « Reply #10 on Apr 28, 2009, 7:37pm » | |
it's fine, it will make things interesting.
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