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Post by James on Feb 26, 2009 22:25:09 GMT -5
The flow of the words did strike me but my poetry ignorance caused me to not know if it was good or bad.
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Post by Kayla on Feb 28, 2009 12:04:04 GMT -5
xD it's okay, I don't really understand poetry. I think it's more like how it sounds in the end or if it expresses what you want. If it suits Nox then I suceeded.
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Post by Kayla on Jul 3, 2009 10:22:12 GMT -5
Desumo's poem- (I've owed for far too long, I apologize James. I'd forgotten all about it until now x.x)
Bolting through the air, Reflections of horror tearing the skies, Yet lightning is not all just this. Elementals persuade deadliness to bliss! Assistance and powers unknown before, Desumo is part of the strangest of lore, Friendship being the bond correcting the past, Amett's power he feels he shall outlast. Defeating the dark dragon at every turn Yet not passing up on lessons to learn, The arrival of the day is drawing slowly near, He shall face Amett bravely, without fear.
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Post by James on Jul 3, 2009 14:30:29 GMT -5
It's fine, to be honest I forgot too.
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Post by James on Jul 3, 2009 14:31:52 GMT -5
I do like it, at first i thought you were making Des out to be a monster then I read through and understood.
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Post by Kayla on Jul 4, 2009 6:32:21 GMT -5
You're welcome, and no xD Des is not a monster. I was saying lightning is raw power and it is he who uses it for good rather than destruction
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Post by James on Jul 4, 2009 16:04:28 GMT -5
I figured that out after reading through a couple of times. I need to study poetry more
Since when is this an item shop too?
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Post by Kayla on Jul 14, 2009 8:33:44 GMT -5
The items were added a while back to help business but so far I have had no items to sell xD
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